Hollis teasing Matt were absolutely amazing. And I loved the easiness and casualness of Hollis-Min talk
“Min. Or should I say Alex?” Matt could hear the grin in the Andorian’s voice. “I sure won’t mind.” Wonderful lines!
“Will do,” his friend replied, and then to Min he said soberly, “I don’t want to deal with anymore of his whining. Be nice.” “Aren’t I always?” *GRINS*
Unfortunately, the Andorian was suddenly right behind him, pulling the door open wider. Alex coming in view of Tara – that was amazing! I liked to see Tara’s feelings – showing the happiness first and then being angry. Well, she was worrying about him. She had a right to be angry, IMO. :)
Get in line, Matt thought dryly. That was brilliant! *SMILE*
“Later,” she said, warning him. “And make it to the kitchen soon, so I can see Sadie’s reaction to you before I have to go.” “You’re not going to tell her?” Matt asked, puzzled. “She knows Sadie’s face when she sees me will be priceless.” I absolutely don’t doubt about it! Knowing Sadie, I’m not sure I would look forward to the following talk though.
The clone was standing next to him, and the Kartan glanced at him and then down at himself. I really need a shower. Well, the shower scene was...fascinating, delightful and breathtaking. I enjoyed this part so much. You write these scenes always excellently!
I loved the way you expressed Matt‘s and Alex’s thoughts and feelings. And the understanding (I know – not at everything) in their relationship. Even without talking, they could feel the affection (love) of each other. That was mesmerizing.
His hand found the box on top of the drawers inside. He tugged it closer and then opened it, pulling out the collar that lay inside. The cock in his hand twitched even as Min shook his head and tried to shift away again. Oh boy, I stopped breathing for a moment reading this. You know me. :) I hate the collar. I would be so disappointed to see the collar on Alex’s neck. Maybe it will be necessary in the future, but just now, only with him and Matt – I’m glad Alex said no and Matt was willing to give up his intention (though very reluctantly). But – that was great, very intense moment – and you described it perfectly!
And the „punishment“ – WOW. I really like the way you solved this situation. Excellently done!
The waiting for this update was sooooo long (and torturing :)). But it was definitely worth the wait! Thank you very much for sharing such briliatly written chapter! I look forward to read more. LS.
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Hollis teasing Matt were absolutely amazing. And I loved the easiness and casualness of Hollis-Min talk
“Min. Or should I say Alex?”
Matt could hear the grin in the Andorian’s voice. “I sure won’t mind.”
Wonderful lines!
“Will do,” his friend replied, and then to Min he said soberly, “I don’t want to deal with anymore of his whining. Be nice.”
“Aren’t I always?”
*GRINS*
Unfortunately, the Andorian was suddenly right behind him, pulling the door open wider.
Alex coming in view of Tara – that was amazing! I liked to see Tara’s feelings – showing the happiness first and then being angry. Well, she was worrying about him. She had a right to be angry, IMO. :)
Get in line, Matt thought dryly.
That was brilliant! *SMILE*
“Later,” she said, warning him. “And make it to the kitchen soon, so I can see Sadie’s reaction to you before I have to go.”
“You’re not going to tell her?” Matt asked, puzzled.
“She knows Sadie’s face when she sees me will be priceless.”
I absolutely don’t doubt about it! Knowing Sadie, I’m not sure I would look forward to the following talk though.
The clone was standing next to him, and the Kartan glanced at him and then down at himself. I really need a shower.
Well, the shower scene was...fascinating, delightful and breathtaking. I enjoyed this part so much. You write these scenes always excellently!
I loved the way you expressed Matt‘s and Alex’s thoughts and feelings. And the understanding (I know – not at everything) in their relationship. Even without talking, they could feel the affection (love) of each other. That was mesmerizing.
His hand found the box on top of the drawers inside. He tugged it closer and then opened it, pulling out the collar that lay inside. The cock in his hand twitched even as Min shook his head and tried to shift away again.
Oh boy, I stopped breathing for a moment reading this. You know me. :) I hate the collar. I would be so disappointed to see the collar on Alex’s neck. Maybe it will be necessary in the future, but just now, only with him and Matt – I’m glad Alex said no and Matt was willing to give up his intention (though very reluctantly). But – that was great, very intense moment – and you described it perfectly!
And the „punishment“ – WOW. I really like the way you solved this situation. Excellently done!
The waiting for this update was sooooo long (and torturing :)). But it was definitely worth the wait!
Thank you very much for sharing such briliatly written chapter!
I look forward to read more.
LS.