For now, I'll leave you with this bit from the next chapter:
"Minril," he said, the scolding tone he'd intended coming out embarrassingly needy instead. This is "torture" - do you know about it? :) Just reading the sentence I'm getting excited for the next update. I can't wait! :) I wish you good luck with your writing. * hugs*
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Date: 2009-04-15 06:59 pm (UTC)"Minril," he said, the scolding tone he'd intended coming out embarrassingly needy instead.
This is "torture" - do you know about it? :)
Just reading the sentence I'm getting excited for the next update. I can't wait! :)
I wish you good luck with your writing. * hugs*