Ack! Can't believe I missed seeing this posted! Just re-read the previous 2 chapters as a refresher. You can just imagine that Min's head has to be spinning with all this in his history.
Particularly nice job on capturing that sort of space-y feeling of when things have gone horribly horribly wrong. Time shifting, hearing's not right...yeah!
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Date: 2010-03-05 03:18 am (UTC)Particularly nice job on capturing that sort of space-y feeling of when things have gone horribly horribly wrong. Time shifting, hearing's not right...yeah!
So pleased to see this - glad you posted :-)