This chapter was so intense and so BLOODY well written. I love Min and now I love him even more. You caught his emotions brilliantly and you are a terrific writer. When I discovered this slave fic universe I never knew I would be up for such good stories as the ones you (among others) have managed to create.
I agree with you about sort of disliking stories where the bottom is just too "unmanly" or weak. Min is a whole character with flaws, needs, thoughts of his own and a history to make any sane person break down and love him to bits and pieces. I want Min and his siblings to be happy - and I really feeeel for them. WhÃch only a good writer can make me do. Coudos!!!!
Great chapter
Date: 2010-03-06 08:13 pm (UTC)I agree with you about sort of disliking stories where the bottom is just too "unmanly" or weak. Min is a whole character with flaws, needs, thoughts of his own and a history to make any sane person break down and love him to bits and pieces. I want Min and his siblings to be happy - and I really feeeel for them. WhÃch only a good writer can make me do. Coudos!!!!