Date: 2009-05-11 06:33 pm (UTC)
I can't decide how I feel about Matt. On one hand, he is a workaholic with a kind side, on the other hand, he treats Min in a somewhat unkind manner. Maybe most slaves do not have the mental capacity to feel as hurt by their Master's actions as Min? Or perhaps they just hide it better..

Poor Min. Yes, I can see how most people would not want their slaves to be book smart. Wonder about Min's childhood, assuming he had one since you compared this to 'The Island'.

This is really well written! Thank you for taking the time to ensure good grammar and syntax. Looking forward to the thickening of the plot!
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