Yep, on the planet Calnith though, not Karta. :P I'll say that the slave in this one is not rebellious, unlike certain others who do not need to be named, ahem.
Hey I was going at such a good clip it seemed a better idea just to continue on until I was done! No pesky editing before posting. Plus, I think I'll evaluate it after I'm done, see whether I think it is publishable. I feel like Spliced in all its weirdness is a hard sell, while I think this story is more approachable.
Queen? What Queen? >:D
In all seriousness, really need to work on that one, yes. Unfortunately, still stuck on pesky plot stuff.
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Date: 2011-06-30 04:13 am (UTC)Yep, on the planet Calnith though, not Karta. :P I'll say that the slave in this one is not rebellious, unlike certain others who do not need to be named, ahem.
Hey I was going at such a good clip it seemed a better idea just to continue on until I was done! No pesky editing before posting. Plus, I think I'll evaluate it after I'm done, see whether I think it is publishable. I feel like Spliced in all its weirdness is a hard sell, while I think this story is more approachable.
Queen? What Queen? >:D
In all seriousness, really need to work on that one, yes. Unfortunately, still stuck on pesky plot stuff.
Good, glad to hear it. Thanks!