flighty_dreams

I discovered your story “Spliced” two days ago and I couldn’t stop reading till completing the last chapter you have posted. Your writing is amazing. The characters are interesting and well defined, the conflict in Alex/Min expresses a very real feeling in those with actual “Adorian” genes in real life. Regarding this particular subject I am anxious to know how will you solve the conflict? Will Alex/Min really become one and happy and so a willing strong slave in a Master/slave consensual relationship? Something I love is the structure of your work: how you introduce the turns and topics not following a time linear development, using flashbacks, dreams, characters' toughs, interludes... and yet all fits and the story is not confusing but crystal clear. The plot is extremely interesting without any hint of the exceeding twisting and action many stories depict. I mean that you go for what the story needs, you focus in the conflict and let it breath without unnecessary complications that would make it banal at the end. I have sympathized a lot with Matt in this chapter, as Alex seems blind out of emotion and feared faces may have formed. You make my happy with your story. Thanks.